Thank you Jezrael for trying your best with this piece of writing. You followed all the signs of success and have published an interesting poem. Excellent work!
Wow Jezrael! What an amazing poem that you have written here! You have used some fantastic descriptive language, and I could really visualise all the items in the pocket! I think the mystery pocket belongs to a soldier. My favourite line is the one about the poppy.
Hi Miss Percy Thank you for coming straight to my blog and commenting on it and i'm not going to tell you who it is yet, i'll only tell you maybe next week
I think it is a soldier Jezrael. You have used such descriptive language. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jezrael for trying your best with this piece of writing. You followed all the signs of success and have published an interesting poem. Excellent work!
ReplyDeleteThank you Misses Moore for commenting on my work
DeleteWow Jezrael! What an amazing poem that you have written here! You have used some fantastic descriptive language, and I could really visualise all the items in the pocket! I think the mystery pocket belongs to a soldier. My favourite line is the one about the poppy.
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DeleteHi Miss Percy Thank you for coming straight to my blog and commenting on it and i'm not going to tell you who it is yet, i'll only tell you maybe next week
ReplyDeleteHello Jezrael,
ReplyDeletegood work on your blog you have done a very goood job.
Yours Sincerely Abdul
I am announcing who's pocket it is get ready!!! it is a SOLDIER!!!!
ReplyDeleteWell done on everyone who got it right!
Thanks for updating us Jezrael! I've been super keen to find out whether or not my guess was correct!
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